The Banjo Player’s Brother

Synopsis: The Banjo Player’s Brother is an advanced level interactive story, which follows the journey of a hapless banjo player on his quest to stop being mistaken for his criminal brother and find some sense of meaning and value after he has been imprisoned for a crime that he did not commit.

The story is set in the United States, the Andes and the Pacific Ocean.

The language focus for the story is listed on the first page and there are eleven episodes as well as an epilogue and a prologue.

Download the text: The Banjo Player’s Brother (Word doc), by Mark White

You can read the full text online with notes on passive voice by following this link: The Banjo Player’s Brother – full text

There is a poetry version of the story at this link: The Banjo Player’s Brother – a poem


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  33. mary says:

    The Banjo Player’s Brother

    you give us the text but I need listing the story how can i got it to listing.Becouse listing is butter than reading to improve my Englishe.

    • Aaron says:

      Hi Mary, we would gladly provide you with the opportunity to listen to the audio, but at the moment we don’t have it. It is very time consuming to produce, so perhaps in the coming months we can put it together. When we do, we will be sure to let you know about it. In the meantime, take the text and practice speaking it with your friends.

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      I aggree with you, Marry. I think it is very useful to practice speaking with friends too. If you want to i am read to have practice with you. What about you?

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